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Hemingway – Write One True Sentence

My favorite Hemingway book is “A Moveable Feast.” because he writes about starting out as an unknown writer in Paris struggling to find his voice.

“All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence you know.” – Ernest Hemingway, A Moveable Feast.”

Hemingway’s true sentence is short declarative and crisp like a bite of Michigan apple. He uses one or two syllable words with a rare three syllable thrown in. Here’s a line where he describes a lady sitting in the cafe.Pick out someone in the cafe and try to describe what’s unique about them in as few words as possible.

Even though his wife and him were dirt poor with a new infant to feed, he got out of the house and wrote in cafes or a hotel room he rented for his writing studio. Away from the distractions of his wife’s talking and constant demands of looking after a new-born he was free to create.

Poverty can be a blessing. Starvation heightened his senses. He would visit art museums and study the details of the food displayed in the pictures. He hunted and killed pigeons to eat. His hobby was walking and observing. To avoid driving himself crazy with hunger, he devised walking routes that avoided favorite cafes and restaurants.

Here’s a passage instructing the writer to always finish his writing for the day knowing what he is going to start with the next day,

“It was wonderful to walk down the long flights of stairs knowing that I’d had good luck working. I always worked until I had something done and I always stopped when I knew what was going to happen next. That way I could be sure of going on the next day. ” – Ernest Hemingway, A Moveable Feast

And advice for getting started on those days when the muse has abandoned us.

“But sometimes when I was started on a new story and I could not get going, I would sit in front of the fire and squeeze the peel of the little oranges into the edge of the flame and watch the sputter of blue that they made. I would stand and look out over the roofs of Paris and think, “Do not worry. You have always written before and you will write now. All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence you know.” So finally I would write one true sentence, and then go on from there. It was easy then because there was always one true sentence that I knew or had seen or had heard someone say. If I started to write elaborately, or like someone introducing or presenting something, I found that I could cut the scrollwork or ornament out and throw it away and start with the first true simple declarative sentence I had written. – Ernest Hemingway, A Moveable Feast

7 Habits of Effective Writers

A lot of success in anything comes down to establishing the right habits.

Habit 1: Keep a notebook

Hemingway, Bradbury, Fitzgerald all did it. They had a notebook. Keep a notebook in your pocket or backpack. When Lady Muse favors you with an idea or you overhear a good line – jot it down. Immediately. Often ideas are like dreams, incredibly real in the moment then disappearing into the mist a moment later. Capture the moment.

Jot down overheard conversations. Sketches of people. Rhythmic lines that resonate.

When I sit down to write I like to spend 5 minutes brainstorming ideas in the rear pages of my notebook. It’s my idea jar. Somedays I have wealth of ideas and somedays none. Today was good and I jotted down these ideas down for stories:

Writing in coffee shops – Review Starbucks
Rammed Earth Article for customer site
Starbucks Macdonalds Corporate but convenient
How to eat a chicken wing
Political Economy of Hunger – Was Adam Smith Right?
Good regulation versus bad regulation
Inconvenient Truths
Why I write on Hubpages
Why I write
7 Habits of Successful Writers
The 7 Writers you’ll meet in Heaven (Take off on the 7 people you’ll meet in heaven)
How to use wireless in a coffee shop

Habit 2: Get out of your head – Read, Listen, Observe

Just like a painter becomes more aware of light, shadows and colour. A writer needs to develop an awareness of the world if he is going to describe it,

Just as an aside, I’m surprised by how many writers are former language teachers, English teaching is a great way to make a living while traveling gaining experiences to write about. I’ve written a hub about how to get a job teaching English in Japan. Check it out.

Habit 3: Write every day. Or shit happens. Show up anyways.

In each life some rain must fall. There’s always an excuse not to write. No excuses, Get in the habit of writing everyday.

Mordecai Richler thought that writers are born not grown. And therefore do not need to practice. Are you born to be a hockey player or was John Lennon born to be a great musician? Malcolm Gladwell argues in his book, “Outliers” that it takes 10,000 hours to make a great artist whether you talk about great musicians from Mozart to the Beetles or hockey players.

Anyway the more you practice writing, the better you will get.

Have a certain output each session, Write a lot

If you want to write as a hobby, then you can get away with only writing a little. But if you’re writing on the web for pennies a word then you need to produce. I’m surprised by how much successful writiers like Christopher Hitchens, Ray Bradbury and Isaac Asimov managed or manage to pump out.

A lot of success is being in the right place at the right time. The more material you have the more likely someday you’ll hit the writing sweepstakes jackpot. Then all the other material will increase in value. Think of Dan Brown and “The Da Vinci Code”. When the Da Vinci Code became such a great success, his previous two novel became minor hits as well.

Be part of a community

One of the best benefits of Hubpages is the community. A community with mentors to read to to help develop your skills. And support on those days when you feel like giving up. One of the most rewarding parts of the day for me is signing in and seeing how many people have read my hubs and replying to the comments people have made.

Enjoy the journey

Make friends along the way and enjoy the trip. The ultimate destination is the same for everyone.